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A New Beginning

Have you ever wondered why you born. They say everyone was born for a reason, everyone has a talent. I was born for one reason... to have my greatest adventure I'll ever have. My life.

My name is Justin Anderson, I did have some ups and downs in my life, but I managed to get past every obsticle that stood in my way. Right now I'm on a cruiser on my way to the lfe-changing Aura City, at least that's what everyone's been saying. Right now my older brother, Lance, is waiting at the docks. He almost five years older then I am, but I was always the smarter one. Even though Lance in twenty-five, he was a huge success ever since he entered the city. I was just against the railing, looking at the biggest city that lucario have ever made.

"Hey, you!"
I turned around to see a lucario, about thirty with a half-empty beer bottle in his left hand.
"Uh... can I help you?"
He just put his right hand over my shoulder.
"You see this city? This city changes peopele. Lengend has it that this city has some sort of mythical power... or something."
I was paying attention only half the time, his breath smelled as bad as the bathrooms on this boat.
"Yeah..." I took his arm off my shoulder "I've heard that."
"So, why are you coming here, stranger?" The lucario asked me.
I just starred out to the horizon for a few seconds. "To put my life back together. I'm hoping this city can chage me as it does to everyone else."
Just as I say that, the boat comes to a sudden stop, almost knocking me over. Then a voice was heard over the intercom.
"Passengers, we have arrived to Aura City. Please watch your steps while exiting the boat. Thank you, and have a nice evening."
"Well, it was nice to meet you, uh-"
"Dave." The lucario said.
"Dave, well maybe we will see each other again in the future." And with that, I was off.
"Drunk" I whispered to myself.

A minute later, I was on the staircase to getting off the boat. I felt glad when I finally felt my feet touch the ground. It has been at least a week that I've been on the boat. I saw a female lucario jump into a guy's arms, and I just walked away, looking for Lance's car. But he was nowhere in sight.

I waited ten, twenty, thirty minutes for Lance, until I finally saw a big, six-door, black car pull up right besides me, Then when the window rolled down, I saw Lance's face.
"Hey, little bro!" Lance said with a big smile on his face. "Get in the car."
And with that, I got into the car.
"Hey Lance." I said. "What's been up with you lately?"
Lance started to drive away from the boat, and onto a highway.
"Nothing much with me, same as usual. The buisness is going good, same old same old." Lance just turned his eyes at me. "What about you?"
"Just kept it steady for the past four years. Bascically nothing is going on with me right now."
"Well, that's going to change." Lance declared.
I looked out the window, and saw all of the flashing lights.
"This is the center of the city." Lance said, also looking out the window. "And if you look a little to the left, you can see the Anderson Mall.
I saw it. it was the largest mall I've ever seen. "You own that place!?"
"Yep, all two miles and four stories of that place." Lance said, who looked very proud. "My apartment is only a couple blocks from here. You will be working at that mall starting tommorow."
I looked confused. "What am I going to do?" I asked.
"You'll see." Lance stopped the engine. "Here we are. The Goldview Hotel."
I looked up. The hotel is fifteen floors tall. "Wow."
"Come on, let me show you."
Me and Lance both got out of the car and walked into the hotel.
I looked at Lance. "What floor?"
"The top floor. I own a penthouse."
The elevator door closed, and we went up to the top floor. It took a couple of minutes, but we reached the top floor. It was right when we got off when I saw a large door that leads inside the penthouse. Lance gets out a small key.
"Now as long as you live here, you live under my rules. If you do, you can live in this..."
Lance opens the door, and I was amazed at what I saw inside.  In the center there was a small pool with tiles around it, almost right above it was a large TV. And some decorations above some parts of the wall.
"OK, first things first. The wall of the left, there are two doors. The one on the left will be yours, and the one on the right is mine. Tommorow you start your first day at the mall. Afterward you can enjoy the rest of the day her eif you like."
I just ahd my mouth wide open. "What- oh! Yeah sure."
"Well, goodnight."
"Wait, I just got here."
Lance looked at me like I was crazy. "It's almost two in the morning!"
I looked at the clock, Lance was right. I couldn't belive how late it was already.
"Okay Lance, whatever. Good night."
Lance walked into the right door, and I walked into the left. In my room was a king sized bed, a desk and computer, and a window. Down below I saw a lot of the city. I slipped into bed, and almost immediatley I fell asleep...
Justin has returned... Enjoy! :D
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PhiliChez Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well now I've gotten to this. I'm glad I did because now I know that everything turns out ok in the lance anderson stories one way or another. Let's see if I can get any hints as to what is coming up by reading all of these. I hope you gave lance a past in these stories.
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34521467 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That's one reason why I wrote TToLA. I felt like there wasn't enough info on his past, so I felt like I needed to expand on it
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PhiliChez Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I see, but i imagine that little T and lance didn't actually have a past together when you wrote it, but now they do. im only on ch 13 so there may be more info I haven't seen. anyway, I guess things turn out ok and that there are only so many characters left in his story that you can kill off. and i guess he gets a mall and gets over the death of his would be wife
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Raven24000 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011  Student Filmographer
Lance is a rich pimp! XD Good story.
Say, what about the other ones?
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